I wear my pain out on my sleeve for all to see (lyrics - work in progress)

this is just some word vomit to be edited. this will be part of a song eventually.

i wear my pain on my on my sleeve for all to see
maybe a stranger will take the time to talk with me
but only for a nominal fee
we'll sit on our couches and talk about life
about this cold world and all its strife
with which my life is rife
with this thought i behold my knife
but throw it away
because i'm hoping there's a reason
to live another day

i'm addicted to my tears,
taste the saltiness on my lips
an ocean to drown in,
briny, mixing with this bottle
suffocating the screams
and helping me sleep

Reviews

[Joe Butler]

This will make a great song, I'm sure.