KILLMANWARHILL

a hike I have been to through the northern range in Trinidad

 Shadows of a blazing sun not cease,
And every two hundred yards I pause-
and drench my self with perfumed breeze.
With miles of flowers, shrubs, and leaves
This virgin forest with giant trees. 
 
Here on Killmanwar hill-
 I drank my fill.
Of natures bliss.
Though the trail is hard- I dismiss;
With thoughts of life mist.

when I wave my hands;
You walk me through these rugged Lands.
Breath of fresh air my soul refreshed;
Make me lighted joyously about- with a weary band.
 Paria fall, turtle rock and treks of sand.
    
 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Again the description gave life to the poem. It the place real? I will research. I like the description of the terrain and the thoughts.
"Here on Killmanwar hill-
I drank my fill.
Of natures bliss.
Though the trail is hard- I dismiss;
With thoughts of you."
The above lines were strong and I like them. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Rose of many colours]

Killmanwar hill is a long and steep hill in one of my hiking trips I climb. This poem is based on my experience of how I climb it. and the strategy I used. I behold thoughts of someone I fell in love with..The place is located in the North Coast of TRINIDAD. All my poems are based on true story.

[Coyote Poetry]

I thought so. I did research and found. I like stories of local areas of a writer. Teach you about other places and thoughts.

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you for sharing yours as well.. I guess some times we as poets share some of the same history..

[m.s.early]

Nature is such a beautiful and fulfilling muse. You compliment it well.

[Rose of many colours]

thank you....

[Rose of many colours]

Killmanwar hill is a long and steep hill in one of my hiking trips I climb. This poem is based on my experience of how I climb it. and the strategy I used. I behold thoughts of someone I fell in love with..The place is located in the North Coast of TRINIDAD

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hello my fellow Trini.This was a beautiful write my friend :)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This was unique and wonderful from the title till the treks of sand. This one is a very professional write in my opinion on Neruda's style...Bravo.........

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you Sami, for this wonderful praise of this write. I can see that you are a professor.
bless you great writer

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Just a simple creative man. You are welcome...:).................

[Sami Khalil]

Long live Trinidad....

[Rose of many colours]

Thank you
Apreciate it . long time I was here

[Sami Khalil]

Yes mam. You are welcome.