Rose

I was pondering existence. My fellow artist inspired this Haiku. Thankkksss🤗🤗

Are, is or can be 

Is it all a part of us 

As a rose with thorns

Author's Note

Thank you🤗🤗🤗

Reviews

[Trace]

Nice. I ponder this on a daily basis.
When gazing into the vastness of universe and knowing there is no beginning or end, and we are such a small part of it. Yet, as small and seemingly insignificant as we are, we still have such immense feelings and emotions.

Trace

[Kady R.]

Thanks Trace for your review. I didn't think of it that way. There is a lot of feelings and emotions that complies us small beings in this vast universe (just like you said).

I love to be apart of the community of writers because it is one way to share those emotions and capture those feelings and moments. Plus I'm a strong believer that the arts has the ability to change the world. Were so small yet have the abilities to seek change and change movements.

Thanks Trace!!!:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Really like this, packs a lot in three lines. In second line, did you mean "a part"?

[Kady R.]

Thank you for your input Jacob!! I went ahead and changed "apart" to" a part" hahahahhaha!!

I really appreciate the reviews, and the edit!!!! Editing isn't my forte. Thanks again Jacob!! :)