Winter is over

Another I did for spring. Enjoy! :)

Frost on the ground,
Trees whisper no more
The frost melts
the birds begin to sing 
winter is over, rejoice.

Author's Note

Please let me know how I did. :)

Reviews

[minisla]

Nicely written

[Veratresa]

Thank you!

[zainul]

Awesome

[Veratresa]

Thanks! :D

[zainul]

Please check this word:whisperer
Should it be:whisper ?

[Veratresa]

Yes it should thank you for pointing that out. :)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,talented poet.:)

[Veratresa]

Thank you. :)

[zainul]

:)

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

The imagery if winter is captured in your words. I appreciate your personification using the abstract object just to get to the point and for the language very easy and streghth to the point. well done.

[Veratresa]

Wow, thank you very much!

[D.M. Grant]

Very nice.

[Veratresa]

Thank you!