Clouds Rolling In

I was inspired by the rain. :)

The clouds high, the sky bright

Wind blowing lazily

Clouds darken

Thunder cracks, lightning burns the sky

The storm has come.  

Author's Note

Please let me know what you think. ^.^

Reviews

[Mark MacDonald]

Very precise. Reminds me of the poems of Li Quaing of the late Sung dynasty

[Veratresa]

Thank you. :)

[Samuel Dickens]

I'm no authority on poetry, but I like this. Your few, well-chosen words convey both meaning and emotion.

[Veratresa]

Thank you so much! :)

[Harrisen Viator]

Oh this is very well written. I can practically feel the storm coming. I like how abrupt the change is, because it's just like most storms. They come out of nowhere.

[Veratresa]

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :D

[Imara]

A beautiful storm! I love how you start out in the clear spring time description. Creates great contrast for when the storm comes. One of the best free verse poems I've read in a while. Great Job. (Ps go fellow writer from Illinois!!)

[Veratresa]

Wow, thank you very much! I'm new to poetry so that means a lot. :D Haha awesome to see someone from my area on here. ^.^

[Imara]

I would have never guessed! You're good! Yea, that's my home state! Gotta love it ^^

[Veratresa]

Well thank you thats really nice of you! :) Ha mine too. :D

[Imara]

^_^

[Veratresa]

:D

[Brandon S. Whitten]

This brings you into the moment, excellent read and write. Love thunderstorms.

[Veratresa]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I also really like thunderstorms. :D

[zainul]

Vividly depicted the storm.
I am feeling the thrust of storm with burns of lightning.

[Veratresa]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

[zainul]

You are welcome,talented writer. :D

[Veratresa]

Well again thank you. :D

[zainul]

:)