Dreams, keep us going

We sail on through the night, soldiers of fortune, tell the story if you can!

You cross this line,

 every inch of you pushes.

Every push, every scrape, every punch.

Every kick, every drop of my blood,

Pushing the light,

Pushing the man,

Pushing the Comets fire!



Run!!!!

Chase this Light,

Bring the fight,

Every blow will be replied with three,

Every inch will be pushed back!!!!!

CHASE THE COMETS FIRE!!!!



My face shall take the blow,

my chest will take the punch,

my muscles will scream!

Bring the fight to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS LINE WILL NOT BE CROSSED!

THIS DREAM WILL NOT FALL!!

THIS COMET'S FIRE SHALL BURN THE NIGHT'S SKY!!!


Our bodies will burn,

your hands will be bruised and broken,

your muscles will scream,

your limbs will slowly ache...

But my line will not be crossed!!

Your skins will begin to burn,

blister,

wither,
 
fail,

but my dream will still BURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

Flash of comet fire,
coming to find ya,
almost blinded by the light!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His destiny was clear,
the comet leaves today,
and Eden waits tonight!



Thank you Mr. Clemens

Reviews

[KAREN]

Nice imagery, very creative way to express keeping your dreams alive, I felt this poem.

[Gypsy Dreamer]

Whoa, felt like I was living in this. It's powerful and magnetic! love this.

[thisis2]

The words sound like a song when I read them. The imagery is powerful too.

[Pax]

i love ths strong flow of emotions in every line.
a wonderful write.

[Wild Willow Blue]

So expressive! I love it. I can really feel your emotion behind these words. Great.