Black Velvet

Submission for contest.

We locked eyes as we each had a taste

You flashed a smile while my heart raced

F**k it, come place your hands on my waist  

Reviews

[Sydney Dreama]

I truly love this poem. short and says it like it is.
Everyone in life has had one of these moments and there is no other way to put it.

[Angi]

That last line has me grinning, Diana. When the drinks go down just right and the lights are low, some kind of faux magic grabs hold. I like this piece. Angi~

[Diana Lynn]

Thank you! :)

[Aaron the Baron]

I like this. It's short, simple, and bursting with desire. Powerful words and it made me smile!

[Diana Lynn]

Thank you. This one took me the most time out of the 3 I submitted.