Mailde

Dedicated to my fellow buddy, Gabriel

Dreaming about 

falling,

Waking up and not 

dying,

Not seeing what's in plain view, 

But modestly 

smiling.

Happy, but 

crying.

You're trying and 

trying

But, all you do

Is practice your 

lying.

You deceive your 

peers

Just to overcome your 

fears

And stop the 

tears...

And that's what scares me the most.

Author's Note

Someone I know always says "...and that's what scares me the most..."
So I made a poem.

Reviews

[Suari]

using xxxx suarilandzinho bjao brit

[Sofia Brun]

First off, love the name. Secondly, I like the simplicity of it. Thirdly, it's deep and I'm a sucker for deep s**t. Fourthly, I adore that you dedicated it to someone. ^-^

[Mother_Yolk]

Hahah Mailde... She always says that and it really puts me on edge. Much obliged, Sofa Master lol

[Sami Khalil]

"You deceive your

peers

Just to overcome your

fears

And stop the

tears.."

A powerful write. Thank you for penning...:).....

[Mother_Yolk]

Haha your review is much obliged. (: Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[Honor'd]

Haha nice poem! it's not complex at all and it's great how you were inspired to make a poem by remembering someone else's words... good job

[Mother_Yolk]

Thank you so much! I felt compelled to write this. The person says it more than you imagine - it's quite humorous!