Closet Monster

I want to hug you, is all...

As dark as his shadow was, I hugged him, relenting to the overwhelming urge to hold the closet-monster in my arms forever. But as I looked down at sharp demon claws violently tearing through my chest, I realized I shouldn't have trusted someone with that many teeth in the first place.

Author's Note

(: Two sentences.

Reviews

[Suari]

These are one of the most intense two sentences I've ever laid my eyes on. It's so violent it reminds me that Monsters Exist

[Mother_Yolk]

Hahah... Man, I like you! Thank you! I was going for that, too (:

[Sofia Brun]

Yeah, two sentences and yet you make everyone else's stories sound like a bunch of amateur bullshit.
Anyways, great super tiny story.

[Mother_Yolk]

Haha oh gosh, you make me laugh! (: Thanks so much, Sofa!

[Marie]

Very descriptive two sentences.

[Mother_Yolk]

Thank you for the commentary!

[My-two-lives]

I love this, and the way it can include so much detail in so few lines; It's brilliant!
Good luck in the contest. ^^ Even though i entered too, i kinda hope that your one wins.. XD So yeah :P Good luck. :)

[Mother_Yolk]

Hahah thank you so much! Good luck to you too! I'll just hope that yours wins as well, yeah? But I suppose we'll see when the contest is over (: Thanks again.

[My-two-lives]

Ahaha, yeah, we'll see when it's over; :)
And, You're welcome! ^^ and thanks >w