I am...

I am...

A Poem by Mr. Gabriel
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A catchy little poem I thought up one day. It's about self identity in the world, and it applies to all... me, and you too. Originally posted on FictionPress, it has undergone a few changes

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I am what I am

I do what I am

I want what I am

Because I am

Do you want to know who I am?

Look in yourself

See your soul wriggling in your pits

I am the new cult of personality

 

I am...

I am a symbol of ecstatic... sentimentation

The reality ripped off and abused by every rebellious sensation

I am the newest chapter in a book called Revelation

One who resists the eroding calls of temptation

I am one who quivers in the ire of adulation

I am one who knows God is our own creation

And that God is our beloved creator moralization

I am but one of a new generation

A generation that like all others suffers some kind of damnation

I am a creation of the desire of the truly free nation

A result of years of provocation

Industrialization

Procrastination

Alienation

And the coming of the worst of indignations

I have for myself my own destination

Where I will open a Pandora's Box of realization

 

Won't you accompany through my Odyssey of individuation

As I make my final independence declaration?

 

 

 

© 2008 Mr. Gabriel


Author's Note

Mr. Gabriel
Lots of "-ation", I know. I guess you could call it a gimmick. Like it or not, please do tell!

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I really liked it! The "-ation"s gave it a unique ring to it, but you could have varied your word endings. I especially liked the part, "A result of... Alienation." I tried to write a poem like this once, but it wasn't very good. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Mr. Gabriel
Mr. Gabriel

Land O' Lakes, FL



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As you can tell by now, my name is Gabriel. I've been around for sixteen long years, and i've discovered many an interesting thing, most notably my rather extraordinary ability to put words onto paper.. more..