To my love

This was a piece that I wrote for my married friends to give to their wives . I am not married but maybe someday .

To My Love
 
 
When first I came into this world,
Alone I stood as one.
He gave me all the tools I’d need,
But my creator was not done.
 
He said to me one day “My son,
From this day on you will be two.”
He gave to me a gift that day.
On that day,
He gave me you. 
 
 
Without you I am incomplete
And I wanted you to know.
That every day that I am on this earth,
My love for you will grow.
 
					

				

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

This poem shows that love is progressive. Yes, we fall in love, but love does not stagnate. God wants man to have a help mate and to create unity from two. There is nothing more beautiful in this world than love, real love. Your words speak of forever and undying love.

I want to know how this love feels some day. For a moment, I was able to imagine love conquers all.

[octane143]

lovely. Be thankful that you have it. That oneness some of us search for and never find. The person you wrote this for is damn lucky

[Prose-full]

very, very nice...i wish it was compatible with my contest ,"easy on the eyes"; it would definitely be placed...at any rate it's beautiful..

[Kara Emily Krantz]

what a lovely tribute to 'your other half' - i love the connection to the earth and the Lord, too. lovely :)

hugs

[Kaleidoscope Apocalypse]

There is a great amount of passion in this piece. I think it flows nicely and you've captured everything precisely the way it should be. Congratulations on a job well done!

[badgirl beth]

Great passion and emotion penned onto page..what a briliant write to say I love you..My pleasure to read and review.Cheers:)

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that is beautiful. believe me, any woman will want to get that poem.