City Song bird

I turn my ear to the sky

And listen for the message from inside

He speaks to me quietly,

 Softly he speaks

 

I turn my face to the sky

 To accept his gift to my life

His grace rains down on me

To wash away my sin

 

There is no excuse for to sin

His message comes from within

In the song birds song

I hear him

 

Speaking to me ... quietly

Softly he speaks

To me

“You have been forgiven”

 

Reviews

[RHEA CROSLEY]

I like that because all creation is God's message to us. George Washington Carver after the ciivl war wanted to help revitalize the economy of the south. He went to a laboratory and discovered 300 things you could do with a peanut. Everything from borden milk to latex was discovered by him in that peanut. He testified before congress who asked him how he discovered so much. He said he would bring his bible into his lab and ask for the presence of God to guide him. He also, said that all the plants and seeds were God's little books and they had much to say in them. God does seem to know a lot and I know He has helped me out a bunch through all kinds of His books.

[Kitty]

Awww that is soo pretty. I love this Mr. Lopez!!!

God bless you,

Melba

[The Tao of Bri]

NICE so much truth isn every word her, so aptly and nicely put!

well written and good choice of words. Poem is simple with a strong message. Good write

[Silent Pacer]

very nice. I can tell you are on a mission of finding one's self, and acceptance. you seem to be furthering yourself, and doing a very nice job of it. very nicely done

[Kari]

Hey, I like that!! Its really nice!

[Belinda Rice]

I relly like this cause i have been struggling alot and this poem relly hasme in tears beacuse i have asked god evry single day to for give me.....just your words on this poem is soft fet and its been a great honor to read it,great wright i hope to see more of your writing

[Kara Emily Krantz]

oh, i adore this message. it was a beautiful thing to read right now :) thank you

"I turn my face to the sky

To accept his gift to my life

His grace rains down on me

To wash away my sin"

that is just gorgeous stuff right there. what a lovely tribute to him who forgives all, especially us, who are so unworthy of such grace :)

big hugs