The Unraveling

We sometimes lose sight

Of what’s important in life

When what’s in our view is only

 What we need to survive

I promised him I’d give my best

He promises that the best is yet to come

He renews my mind and rebuilds my heart

In his presence I come undone

Because of who’s I am and not who I am

That I might be in his presence on this day

I can feel him all around me

When all fear from hell is wiped away

Changing me from the inside out

Where my everything bows before you

I was never in control

I will sacrifice my body

Just to save my soul

When this day sees the setting sun

It will find me in his presence

Where I will come undone

When my mind and my heart

Have finally become as one

 

Reviews

[TamiViolet]

Mr. Lopez, this is so pretty. I sense such a kindness within your spirit. I do. Again, colour...striking, not only in presentation but in sincerity of heart. I know sometimes I lose sight of what's really important, but hopefully I am learning. There is such inspiration in your verse, a sense of renewal....awakening as we change from the inside out, and the mind and body become one. So touching...incredibly heart - felt.

[The Tao of Bri]

WOW!! this is quite a contrast form the last one! Woah! The exact opposite! I think that you described love PERFECTLY!!! We can all stand on our own two feet and are individuals...but to reach our highest state, we need to find the One who we synchronize and can be totally open with so we can acheive not only great things in ourselves but for them and everyone.. Synergistic syzygy! this is my fave of yours.. I have known this feeling well, though only once...but will never forget it!

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

This is a truly inspirational piece!
Your words are placed in an amazing place to one another & your flow is perfect.
I can relate to this piece very much!
Thanx for sharing it with me! =]