Prayer for a friend
A Poem by
Mr. Lopez
These are simple words I say
With both hands clasped
For you I pray
My legs bent at the knee
That the world won’t do to you
As it’s done to me
© 2008 Mr. Lopez
Author's Note
i may add to this later......
Reviews
Wow I like this cause I feel like this is a par of me in someway in here you are a great writer please keep them coming...
Posted 17 Years Ago
Simplistic, but with meaning. I love it!
Posted 17 Years Ago
Simplistic, but with meaning. I love it!
A very beautiful prayer. Thank you for sharing it with us. Debileah
Posted 17 Years Ago
A very beautiful prayer. Thank you for sharing it with us. Debileah
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Outstanding. Wow.. I don't think you need to add anything personally, but it's your prayer. I think it speaks infinitely, as is.
Amen.
Posted 17 Years Ago
Outstanding. Wow.. I don't think you need to add anything personally, but it's your prayer. I think it speaks infinitely, as is.
Amen.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow this is sooo good!! Short,Sweet & simple but really really good!!
Kudos!!
Posted 17 Years Ago
Wow this is sooo good!! Short,Sweet & simple but really really good!!
Kudos!!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow! this short and simple poem gave me chills. how true it is, it's not elaborate or filled with big words, but it hits to the heart more powerfully. It makes a statement, and it is full of selflessness. Great job!
Posted 17 Years Ago
Wow! this short and simple poem gave me chills. how true it is, it's not elaborate or filled with big words, but it hits to the heart more powerfully. It makes a statement, and it is full of selflessness. Great job!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful, simple, true
Humble, strong, hopeful
Amazing, and awe-filled writing!
Posted 17 Years Ago
Beautiful, simple, true
Humble, strong, hopeful
Amazing, and awe-filled writing!
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on November 18, 2008
Author
Mr. Lopez Chandler, AZ
About
I was born in Texas October of 1966. Raised in California where i fell in love with music and art. I came from a large , poor family where the most valuable thing we ownwed was our love for each other..
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