Goodnight

 

I found fame and folly

And i wanted to share

I found a young heart

That i thought just might care

 

I thought i could rewright

What i couldn't rewind

I didn't know i'd be shattered

By what i would find

 

There were too many times

When i'd given my all

There were too many scars

From every time i would fall

 

I thought i would try

Just one more time if i dare

All that i found

Was a blank loving stare

 

It's time i found sleep

Maybe this time i won't wake

I just keep givingv and giving

When they only take

 

It's starting to feel like winter

Almost every day

Turns out the price for love

Was too high to pay

Reviews

[justjenn_2u]

I was left with a feeling of wanting to be able to mend your heart though I can't. I felt a cold wind on my shoulder as I read this, and I was left feeling sad. My words can't even express how I wish I had a magic wand.

[Meredith Leigh]

Your writing is always so deep and soulful. I really can pick up a lot from these, and feel a sense of enlightenment almost (I apologize for my spelling) but yes, that was wonderful! Awesome job!

- Kriss

[THE LOST ROSE]

I almost forgot about your writing until I saw your review of my poem. I remeber you have crazy writing skills that people like myself only dream of. this piece took me back a few months when I was entertained one day by reading poem after poem of yours. Thanks for keeping the creativity and bring me back to talent. I really like the pieces you create. The journey is fun and very revealing and full of life experiences. Standing "O".