The One

Will you forgive?

Will you forget?

Will you be able to give me your best?

 

I've made mistakes

I've done it twice

I've given you all I had

 

Is she the one

The one that I

Will truly learn how to love

 

This time I swear

That i'll be there to catch your fall

 

Is she the one

The one that I

Will truly learn how to love

 

As time has passed

I've learned to see the world through your eyes

And appreciate all you've done for this love.

 

This time I swear

That i'll be there to catch your fall

 

Reviews

[Jacqueline]

This is a really sweet poem.
Just a couple of things though: in line 6 I think you meant "given" and you only use a period one time in the poem (line 17). Was that a structural thing or did you not mean to do that?
Either way, good work.