Awakening

Become yourself to be one with all.

Forgotten children sing with me, no longer need we fear, we are all brothers and sisters, death will come so hold life dear. Together we are the fire, to unite the world as we watch it burn. If we work as one, they can't stop us all, it's time to rise, this is the call. The pyramids will crumble as balance is restored, being heard and not ignored, will finally be for all. Unlock the cage of all our kin, we don't answer to man for our sin, it's time to actually be free. One last stand to show them all, that we've seen the writing on the wall, the truth is on our side. Suppress the oppressors, come with me, we can beat the system, as a family.

Reviews

[Aidan]

This was a really strong piece. The format was really interesting. I think you've got a great message here with some pretty evocative imagery. The "Pyramid" line was especially strong. You have a good rhyme scheme going, and it doesn't feel forced. Nice!