A Broken Hearts Finial Plea

You promised me eighty-nine years.
Now I'm left with jaded memories and
Thousands of unwanted tears.

How can you deny my heart next to yours?

Me on top if you turning or minds towards ecstasy.
Please lord help me forget about her laying next to me.
All I want is to break this mental chain.
Release me from loves gone astray pain.

So that I can find someone else with such a sweet name.
A name that I can scream at the top of my lungs when I came.
Allow me to open my heart to someone special
So that eventually I can share my fame.
Please relieve the stress of emotion in vain.

How can you deny my heart next to yours?                                 

   

Reviews

[Masq]

This is a very emotinal write. Very well expressed and eloquently written. Nice job!

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

Jason, this is beautiful, i really love this poem...it gives me chills, and that is good in this weather of 105 degrees....x0x0x0x0x00x

[deeps]

Such raw emotion here, I liked this alot, You can write I like your style

[Lady V]

Raw emotion........I adore your honesty and I can only hope that your journey did not stop with the one that broke your heart. Energy spent can only be ysed as fuel for the future you will have with someone else. I wish you the best of luck with that journey. lol


You always write from the heart and that is a quality that keeps me interested in reading your work.

Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[sheerpoetry]

i feel u

[M. View]

Damn thats raw dude. I like it cause I've been at that place before it's not to good but keep writing about it and it wil subside if you feel that way. You live and you learn.

Nice Write