Whispers In The Night

Crys for help that can neither be heard nor
seen
Stress and inner demons has caused my once
bright and wide eyes to lose their gleam
No one seems to see my pain, so the windows
to my soul must be unclean.                                 

Author's Note

I changed the font color for those who couldn't read it before

Reviews

[Onyx Sky]

Maybe they don't see your pain because you have your blinds and curtains closed? Be open with people and they will be open with you. This piece spoke to me... so some window must be open... Yep, REgardless beautiful write. The last lines were so eye-catching. It really makes you think

[EmpressPoetess]

I can't read this because of the font color.

[sheerpoetry]

the part that sais "no one seems to see my pain so the windows to my soul must be unclean" makes me think that when someone is hurting so bad and no one pays attention it distorts the view from the inside and outside of the window. thats why its better to not have people peeping around till you get your windows thoroughly washed:)

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

Very profound and simple. I read the depth and it's understood without being too simple. Good write.....

[Lyrical Love]

You are so deep!
This great it says to me that you are in search of a better you, and that you need help to do it.
Nice write.