Awake, Anew, the Story of You

Completely changed its original aim from spiritual, to new life.

Born anew, life from the womb. Awake to sunshine from skylines surround. Looking to smiles of bright warm faces, while winds of freedom leave softening traces.

Can you feel it?

The beat of new life, in your hands. Your protection is what they'll need, the love of woman and of man.

Author's Note

Feed me your thoughts. . .

Reviews

[Trigorin]

I like your concept, but I do feel like you've limited yourself a little by making it so short. I think there's a great deal of potential with this topic and you could expand on this a great deal, but if you want to keep it like this, that's your decision.

[SyberRose]

Love your poem and you said so much with just a few lines...enjoyed and liked the title too Justin...SyberRose