Everlasting Passion

"Everlasting Passion"

(My dedication to Hip-Hop Music)

It got to the point, that I had nothing to lose/

So I made a choice, to do the things that I do

I fought and I fought, yet I never thought it through/ 

But now I can see a future, and that future's in you

You slew blue with your beauty, making cute out of the vile/

I can see the truth in your eyes, and in your beautiful smile

I used to be so brokenhearted, I didn't know who to trust/

I so yearned to let it burn, and now it's all ashes and dust

Now that misery has departed, it's you I love and I lust/

Every touch and every thrust, has got me high with a rush/

I love the way you cuss out my enemies, and don't give a ****/

You've been such a good friend to me, and shown nothing but love

Even when my soul had been sold, so I was too cold to feel much/

You were there to hold me down, with a loving kiss and a hug

I love how you read in-between the lines, and see through my eyes/

You've been on my mind most of my life, so will you be my valentine?

Copyright 2015 The Elusive Mr Dunne (All rights reserved)

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the movement of words and thoughts. Good energy and drive to these words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Betty Hermelee]

I think the moral of this poem is push through to to the things you love, and not hesitate about it; it's always best, in my opinion, to live your dram; and, if you can live it with someone you love, all the better.
nice job!
Best, B

[M. J. Smith]

Okay. Interesting. Hip hop music personified as a woman...
You have a very... unique... muse. Rather earthy I should say.