Blood Moon

"Don't go alone on a blood moon, it's calling for blood".

Blood moon calls for blood,
not a good night to walk,
a test for the brave,
a juicy calling - dark come in.

I will show you the path,
soul only, go up, and up.
Don’t weep , bring light,
only death incline.

My love, don’t fade,
I will whisper,
Don’t go alone, don’t leave me,
hold my hand as we walk,
blood moon calls for blood.

Author's Note

Critic Please!
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background : blood moon - harvest time, young girls hunted as pray. love story.
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Reviews

[VertoAtrum]

The flow lost me a bit a few times, but it still put the message across, and did it in an interesting way.

[MrKnowAll]

I agree , there is a problem with the flow.
thanks!