A Cloudy Day

How lovely is this cloudy day
That I can't see the sun
Or better yet that it can't see
To me what life has done
It's much too soon to know just why
but still I toe the line
It may be dark this dismal day
but still this day is mine
I'll count my blessings while I can
Although they might be few
The sun still waits to see my face
As if the old sun knew
I'm not the first to rest beneath
This dark and dismal sky
And soon a dream will find its way
Back to my waiting eye
The gloom will pass and I'll forget
What once I thought my fate
Behind departing clouds I know
For me the sun will wait

Reviews

[Gee]

Like this Mr L. Meter perfect, start to finish, spot on rhyming a a nice wee message contained within

[I Am Svetlana]

I always love cloudy days & the inner calmness they bring me. Every dark day brings a new light eventually. Darkness never lasts forever. I always love standing outside and just watching the clouds slowly travel across the sky, wondering where their destination lies.

[ManasaC]

A very beautiful poem that teaches us that every dark sky will one day see a brighter light.
A brilliant write....

[Mr. Lopez]

Thank you so much for your review. I really do appreciate the words of encouragement.