Someday

Today you see in one dimension
Someday you'll see in three
And on that day you'll understand
What it means to be me

Reviews

[Tabby Mac]

Love it!! Simple yet deep and powerful! Well done!
Tabby

[Suhd]

This poem speaks a lot than the words so few used. A fine job composing it.

[E.G. James]

Wow, a lot of meaning was put into such a short piece. I absolutely love this.

[Mr. Lopez]

Please read Emotional Suicide and let me know what you think. I've been away from the sight for awhile and don't get many reviews because of that. I haven't been writing much either.caught, I suppose, in the quicksand of everyday life.

[E.G. James]

I read and reviewed it. I can't wait to see it when you're satisfied with it. I liked it though.