Undertow

Woke up to thoughts of bitter days
When I folded them up and put 'um
In my pocket
Head feeling like I put my finger
In a socket
But that's alright
I'm ok
'Cause this one is a
Brand new day
I won't get caught in the undertow
Or find myself among the fold
Life's too short and I'm too old
For that

Reviews

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

Mr.Lopez I've missed you. Undertow, I like fresh attitude in these lines.The rhythms offbeat in a in a surreal way, this makes your meaning stronger.Great job and God Bless

Sheer Terror