Beautiful mind

don't let your dreams fade away

Look at me now, you are so blind

I am losing you in my beautiful mind

Take me inside and breathe my air

Fill my empty hopeless prayer…

I would kill my nights in the million lights

If only your eyes would shine in mine

 

Reflect me, you are my hope

Breathe my air, don’t stop

 

Look at me now, I am losing my mind

Your light is too bright, it makes me blind…

Breathe my air, I will hope no more

Take me away, don’t close that door

Leave me behind, you will not regret

Take away my air, take away my breathe.

 

Look at me now, I am so blind

I have lost you in my darkest night….

You have taken away my beautiful mind.

Reviews

[lovergirl]

1st of all i loved your advice (don't let your dreams fade away) and 2nd thak you for this nice and well done writing that's so filled with emotins and passion (y)

[Demii]

This is very sweet and passionate, I enjoyed it!

[Helena]

Thank you ;)

[R Smith]

I believe your beautiful mind is very much intact, it created this brilliant poem, bravo :)

[Helena]

Thank you Richard))