Breathe

Oh I don't care
if no one
likes these songs,
these words!
I might as well care
if people
like me breathing.
This singing,
this writing
is not an option anymore.

I want to breathe again.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

An interesting poem… though short, I feel like it conveyed your message. The feeling of not being able to breathe goes away after a while, and when it does, you'll feel air-light. It's the most exhilarating feeling in the world. Just hang in there, and you'll get to that place soon enough.

Great job!