My Already Broken Heart

A Poem by Serendipity

Jorio - four lines with four words in each line.

What are you doing

Trying hard to break

My already broken heart

It cannot cry anymore

March 14, 2008

© 2008 Serendipity

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Mr. Lopez

It bleeds , it burns, it breaks and it blesses, but the heart also heals to love another day. Short and sweet.

Posted 17 Years Ago

Star-Runner

Short and to the point well put, like this.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Imperfection

Broken hearts come up with the best kind of poetry.
This was an example.

Well written.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 14, 2008
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Serendipity

Sunny, CA

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What we do...A Poem by Erotic Goddess ** i am just a girl who LOVES to WRITE ** ** ** Love Starts with a Smile, Grows with a Kiss, & Ends with a Tear. ** .. more..