Our Fathers Den

This is dedicated to Samone for her loss.

 

Fear not my child

For there is light in the end

As we ascend into heaven

A new life will begin

No need to be afraid

You are now amongst friends

Showered in his loving grace

See your soul is now cleansed

Because we are all God’s children

Love surrounds you

Here in our fathers den

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

It is amazing what a small touch of sincerity can do, especially in wake of all the seems wrong these days. This poem, a pearl among semi-precious stones and shards of glass we have become so accustomed to, shines through with an eloquent touch of love. It is amazing what the simplest touch of sincerity can do... as to inspire this lovely write. Thanx.

[John McGrael]

i really liked this!!

its super super super good
reminds me of my style of writing

[emma]

This is very touching, a very sweet and caring thing to do for your friend.
Beautifully written, I'm sure anyone who has ever suffered a loss could find comfort in this.
I certainly did, and for that I thank you.

[Lauren Beth]

Very sweet, loving poem for a friend who is suffering a loss. Good write :)

[Eidolon Michael]

I really liked it.It was very sweet.Good job.

[Parshall Reed]

Nice poem. I liked it a lot.

[Tomás Ó C..]

A great way to describe Heaven

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

This was very touching it's better then anything hallmark has to to offer. Excellent.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was beautiful. Simply beautiful,

[Kris Tate]

Oh my this brought tears to my eyes. I really needed to read this. Thank you so much.