Sleeping with Paul

Sleeping with Paul

 

I traced his masculine form

with my photographic mind,

never to allow the rush of morning

to enter,

                  there.

 

 

 

photography by Stefan Beutler

Author's Note

...sometimes our past loves have benefits.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Imagination and wishes. The are part of us. A good part for us who love to write. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

I guess it's true what they say, "the heart has a mind of its own". Your presence is always welcomed here, John...thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Kelly and you are welcome.

[Shivam Murari]

This is amazing. So relatable, so cryptic yet so clear. The poem is universal. I wonder how he would react if he read this, but then his reaction might be very similar to yours, to mine, to everybody's.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I would hope that he would feel flattered, then again I will never know! Thank you for your kind insight. It is nice to meet you, Shivam!

[Shivam Murari]

Nice to meet you too.

[Shivam Murari]

Nice to meet you too.

[....................]

Every love we ever have leaves a mark on our hearts and souls. I can close my eyes and remember my first love; I can even recall the scent that lingered in my nose for hours after our first night together. And you are spot on with this piece, Kelly. I just hope there is a former lover out there dreaming the same of me :) Well done!

[Kelly Scheppers]

What an endearing review! I never thought of this conjuring up memories for my readers...I'm flattered to have taken you there. Thank you!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Tangled in an erotic view, whispers snapping exposures, what was that in the eye? Ohhhhh his soul.

Good Morning Paul, Good morning Kelly!

Coffee?

[Kelly Scheppers]

It was ALMOST a hallmark moment! Just a memory, doing what memories do. Yes, I would love some coffee, and a nice long walk with Jackson & Honey! ...oh, and you! Thank you, darlin!

[Alfred Kukitz]

You will be with us this morning Honey! Love you!

[Jamestown]

I think your author's note really says what I was going to say:)
It is so true, something's will never be erased from the mind
and in this case, we don't want them to go anywhere!
Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry and b-blessed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Jamestown. I can't help but wonder if he remembers me...at least I got a poem out of it!

[Jamestown]

Chances are if you him he you, know what I mean?

[Kelly Scheppers]

I think I got the jest of that, thank you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of my first girlfriend and love of my life...what physical we had has never been tainted...
there are memories and dreams still...and weak kneed memories...and dizzying thoughts...and they stay in the past, but my mind goes there...and they are still fresh every day...and thoughts still make me feel weak.

[Kelly Scheppers]

The physical part is always most tangible, for that is the indelible mark made upon our heart. The relativity of time just pulls it more into focus, making us a little more melancholy for what was once so precious, then lost. Your perspective was well made, Jacob...thank you!

[dan]

Kelly, this is SO romantic in such an understated and gentle way. The tracing of his form with photographic mind...these impact lines seemingly flow out of YOUR mind very easily. I could never have written that line, I don't have the aptitude or skills. Reading your stuff is always such a treat, it is a constant stream of flowing poetic ideas. Keep writing and I keep reading, deal? take care...dan

[Kelly Scheppers]

I wanted my words to reveal the romance of the moment, however brief they were. Thank you for a most complimentary review, Dan! Oh, and btw, you've got a deal!! ; )

[sereenaoutloud]

Great write, we all have our own paul...lol

[Kelly Scheppers]

... so true! Thank you for your review!

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Very beautiful. Somehow it gave me a feeling about Paul Walker. May he rest in peace. I always compliment writers who can accomplish a lot with a few words or lines and that is exactly what you have done here. Great job. keep up the good work.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Kristan, thank you for acknowledging the brevity of my words!