California Girls

...a senryu

California Girls

                     

Midriff baring tanks.

Scantily clad lissome limbs.
California girls.

 

 

photography by Michael Greco

 

 

Reviews

[dan]

I could almost hear a Beach Boys song in the distance. Thanks for the visual candy cane. take care...dan

[Kelly Scheppers]

I think I prefer David Lee Roth's version a little more...thank you, Dan!

[alf]

Hi Kelly. Loved your senryu. So relevant to California, I think, alf

[Kelly Scheppers]

Aww, thank you, Alf...so kind of you to say. I'll be posting more, now that I've got my big toe wet! ; )

[Jamestown]

I wish they could be California girls, (beach boys)
Great job! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

You just can't beat the beach boys! I like Katy Perry, too "sun kissed skin so hot, we'll melt your popsicle." ...thank you Jamestown! Hope you have a most joyous Easter!

[Jamestown]

You as well and Katy Perry YEAH DUH Lol. :)

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Bravo!!!! Bravo!!!! So exciting to see your first senryu here and such a beautiful piece at that. See, it's not that difficult when you are already a great poetess. Well-done, Kelly :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

I thank you for your encouragement, my friend...and I do have more to come!

[....................]

I will wait like a child who is dying to open a gift on Christmas morning. You are always welcome :)

[....................]

Believe it or not, i just noticed the picture :)...

[Kelly Scheppers]

...oh, yeah...right!! Your secret's safe with me!

[ANTO]

Gotta love 'California Girls' - this is no different.
'lissome' is such a cool word - I had to look it up but even at first sight it concocts images by its very presence Kelly.
I think I want to be a photographer now...
Thank you for RR'ing this one Kelly.
:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hope all is well in your corner of the world, Anto...thank you!

[ANTO]

Its grand Kelly - Its always great to see you. Is it hott where you are ?
;))

[Matching Socks]

One of my best friends lives in California, I think that heats brings out a different side of us. One that's more fun, carefree, playful.
Love the Senryu, very fitting!

[Kelly Scheppers]

Nice to meet you, Ana...thank you for reading me today!

[Matching Socks]

My pleasure Kelly.

[Coyote Poetry]

I lived in California. I learn few California girls. Most are transfer from cold states. I saw 40 states. Most dangerous and beautiful were the Texas girl. California girls had a attitude. Knew what they wanted and needed. A very nice poem Kelly. I loved California. They loved nature and like to test life. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, John. I'm not a native, but I can honestly say I love it here. No problems with attitudes..life is truly a beach here!

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. I will return this year. I need a week on the beach.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Scratch your eyes out p***y! A pathos filled short piece. Another moonscape picture but from the 'dark side of the moon' lol! Might just get me a holiday in California lol!

[Kelly Scheppers]

..my dark side of the moon, thanks you! ; )