A Love Such as This

As breathless as a falling star,

of monarchs in a mason jar

 

of rainbows in their fullest hue,

of daylight in a mist of dew

 

of children’s laughter,

a newborn’s cry…

the utter joy of being alive

 

to dance in fields of morning glories

the happily-ever-after story, are we, with…

 

a love such as this.

 

 

 

Author's Note

...sorry for the long in between time between posts! I badly sprained my ankle on my daily jog, and have been feeling out of sorts. I hope you enjoy this, for I rarely do a rhyme.

Reviews

[SmittyJas]

THIS IS THE BEAUTY OF YOUNG LOVE AND EVERYTHING THE SURROUNDS A YOUNG COUPLE IN A GOOD MARRIAGE LOVE THIS TYPE OF POETRY FROM YOU KELLY.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I'm sitting in my dark moody heart (my sick friend) when I open the door and their you are sunlight and smile embracing my soul.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm wishing you well and sending my love!

[Robert]

I really enjoy how you pick a moment in time and capture it so well in your writing. I try to do the same thing in my writings, although Im having the dreaded writers block again. Well done Kelly.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hang in there, Robert...it will pass! Thank you so much!

[Leo]

upbeat and energetic..I like it especially the rhyme in the first four lines.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...thank you. I'm beginning to think I should write more with rhyme!

[MadalaJose]

I enjoyed. The rhyming is on point. and the message: good, I like it

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you most kindly, Madala.

[rubie]

I'm also more of a free verse kind of poet myself, but this one's rhymes really do work!

It adds such whimsy to the mood, and creates a real sense of movement.

Lovely, romantic piece.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I missed this review, somehow...thank you, dear Rubie!

[Echoes of Eros]

You've painted such a picture of joy that dances across time, of the bliss that love should be. Now just hoping that your new week is filled with peace and healing. xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

...and the same to you, Eros...thank you!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Inspiring poetry about love! All the hardships of life can be conquered when true love is right there......
Hope you feel better soon......a poet's mind bleeds all the time......it is a double blow when the body aches too.......

[Kelly Scheppers]

So kind of you to say...thank you!

[Jamestown]

Another fantastic one two punch, great poetry and image to
match, always enjoy reading your work:)
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Kelly Scheppers]

..and to you, as well...thank you!

[~]

A darling romantic piece that brings smiles on my face. Love your Rhyming side. :)
Hoping your recovery is going well my dear.
xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

I think I might dip my big toe into the rhyming pool with a little more frequency. I am thrilled for the comments this has garnished me!

[~]

Yes, yes, after a full recovery though :):)