I may never write an American novel,
or win a Pulitzer prize.
I may never see Paris in the spring
or smell sweetly
the golden Iowa wheat. But l shall love you…
And that is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
It is as pure to me as a Minnesota snow
and the perpetual rains that fall
in Seattle. And while you are near
with the brilliance of a million stars in the sky
l will hold you,
longer than the Pacific is deep.
I will treasure you more than any jewel,
and remain yours
far beyond the pyramids of time.
And l will love you.
That is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
As pure to me as a Minnesota snow.
Beautiful words for the emotion of love.
"That is as clear to me as the Colorado mountains.
As pure to me as a Minnesota snow."
Rare is pure and unbounded love. When we find it. Need to hold on tightly. Thank you dear Kelly for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Your reviews always put me in a cognitive mood, John. Thank you so much, my friend.
A lovely write that sounded like you were saying your pledge, your promise to your lover. Just tell him to get it in writing from this page signed you lol:):) A heart felt poem straight from the hearty!!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I'd give you Ayers rock but its just too heavy!
10 Years Ago
Isn't that one of the most impressive landmarks in Australia? Yeah, perhaps just a bit too heavy..... read moreIsn't that one of the most impressive landmarks in Australia? Yeah, perhaps just a bit too heavy...but it's the thought that counts! Thank you, Andrew! ; )
beautiful analogies, nice use of repetition for the last two lines....a dramatic love poem...a romance novel in several lines of a fine piece of writing...
this is such a gorgeous write, Kelly; it's romance in it's purest form, oozing throughout...love the similes and the metaphor, 'And while you are near/with the brilliance of a million stars in the sky' is stunning...your romantic side knows no bounds, my friend!!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
You are too kind, my lobster friend...and it thrills me beyond words...thank you! x