Over Easy

Over Easy 

 

 

 

You are Sunday morning 

with eggs over easy,

with buttered toast

cut on the diagonal

and love 

that overflows

the circumference of my arms. 

Reviews

[alan peter kelly]

Oh my goodness Kelly...such a perfectly balanced serve...breakfast at your place sounds like the bees knees, cats pyjamas and a most invigorating way to spend a Sunday morning.

[barleygirl]

Very sweet & tasty meal of delicious sensory sentiments *yum! yum!* Excellent & well-expressed ongoing analogy. Thanks for sharing!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

A poem about an easy, comfortable, beautiful love. There is hope.

[Suzy Hazelwood]

Oh, that's perfect, and how it should be - every Sunday with the one you love. And what a coincidence I picked this - it's Sunday morning...haha, how precise timing that is!! :oD

I was just thinking, your delicious poem reminded me of a stunning Tumblr food gif blog I found a few months ago(butteryplanet.tumblr.com) Guaranteed to make you hungry. I think your poem here would go so well with one of their delightful food gifs. http://butteryplanet.tumblr.com/post/115667072903/french-toast-recipe

[SmittyJas]

Passion in as few word as possible but with a warming sense.

[MinorArt]

You did it again, I'm in love with this piece!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I appreciate your time and kindness...thank you so much!

[james miles]

This is so perfectly beautiful!:)

[Kelly Scheppers]

So kind of you to say, James...thank you!

[Inject Positivity]

I loved how you used simplicity to create perfection.....Lovely way to start a morning with such love.....Great write.....

[Kelly Scheppers]

I am most thrilled you enjoyed it...thank you for your kind words!

[Delmar Cooper]

Simple words like simple stones stacked in shapes like temple domes.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...nicely rhymed, Delmar...thank you!

[alf]

Oh to have breakfast in bed!!!! Great write!!!

[Kelly Scheppers]

...you've got to watch those toast crumbs, though! ; ) Alf, you're really back!!!!! ; )