Madame Winter

Madame Winter

 

 

 

Dressed to the nines, is she
with limbs of trees

bowing before her,
as the breath of spring

prodigiously coos an orchestration

of well versed forget-me-nots
in her ear.

Reviews

[Andra Dare]

A magnificent portrait and worthy homage to a truly magnificent queen! Beautifully written, Kelly. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Andra. It's wonderful having you here!

[Lisa Lindsey]

"coos an orchestration of forget-me-nots in her ear." Just what Madame Winter needs! Superb, Kelly :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Sorry I'm so late, Lisa...thank you so much! xo

[Roland Petrov]

Magical! This certainly doesn't need turning into a tanka, but I love the challenge:

She's dressed to the nines,
tree limbs bowing before her,
as the breath of spring
coos an orchestration of
forget-me-nots in her ear.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly, an orchestration of
winter tales ... mysteries unsolved,
awakened by the breath of spring,
as tree limbs bow. truly an epic
rendition. Pat

[Suzy Hazelwood]

This made me smile at the very thought! :oD Smiles aside, it's also supremely elegant Kelly!!♥

[Gypsy Warrior Queen]

Oh how I have missed the Queen of mystery and seduction! You never fail to make me feel whimsical with your art. You are movement and flow!

[Tomás Ó C..]

She is fighting off springs lecherous advances here in Ireland and is holding out for Summer himself!

[Patricia Wedel]

Pretty simply said...
My heart is not dead...
just resting until Spring!

[Lydia Shutter]

Wonderful personification and glorious imagery...you still got it, Kelly! :) Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

I've been out of the saddle for a while...feels good to be back. Many thanks, Lydi!

[Trace]

We have had our fair share of winter this year, and I can hardly wait to see the first signs of spring,
and this poem is a wonderful prelude to my wishings.

Very nice,

Trace

[Kelly Scheppers]

You are ever so kind, Trace...thank you!