The Unspoken Sadness

The Unspoken Sadness

photography by / Mecuro B. Cotto

 

 

Could Byron

or Shakespeare

paraphrase the lucidity

the thundering palpitations of my heart,

the unspoken sadness

of opportunities lost

in wait.

 

Reviews

[Shadow Blue]

This is beautifully written

[Kelly Scheppers]

I deeply appreciate that! Thank you, Lindsey!

[Andrew John]

I'm sure they both will capture lucidity but not always as one, her- or himself, holds it. It's strange to try to observe what people are thinking. We may think we think what they are thinking, but it's just our own thoughts. So thoughts are precious things and are, as it were, in our hearts (oh, yes, the hearts that are in our brains, but we know what we mean when we speak of a heart)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for your visit today, Andrew!

[Einstein Noodle]

it can seem that way Legs ... things we want and desire being put on hold for seeming eternities ... and sometimes we are just told no ;) love of course and it's passions and need are forever the most difficult to wait for .. it is agony at times ... i love the directness and minimalism of your very descriptive piece .. it never ceases to amaze me how every day words put together just so .. are powerful, emotive and inspiring .. i don't think Byron nor Shakey can express it more eloquently and for sure in so few lines .. love on ya girl!
E.
ps. the pic is an excellent choice

[Kelly Scheppers]

Your presence here on my page always warms my heart. I have missed you and hope all is well in your world. Thank you for being so dear, and so wonderful, in making my day such an extraordinary one!

[Einstein Noodle]

awwwww back at ya! your writing always satisfies my friend! I am getting back into the swing of things, here at the Cafe' ... reading so many different styles and angles of themes is fulfilling for me. hugs!

[Kelly Scheppers]

It wouldn't be the WC without you!

[Einstein Noodle]

awwww .. you are something else and have made my late afternoon worth the whole of the preceding day .. blessings of joy, truth, peace and comfort to you always

[Kelly Scheppers]

((((hugs, my friend!))))

[Lorry]

May I just butt in a mo to say what a perfect balance between your words Kelly, with E nearly making me fall off my chair by calling you legs!
Ah, it's good to be back! 😃

[Einstein Noodle]

:)))))))))))))))))))))) isn't that her name?? ;) Ms. Buttinsky

[Einstein Noodle]

ps. i love Kelly Scheppers and she knows it :)

[Lorry]

E, I need a new kitchen chair now! 😃

[Kelly Scheppers]

Lol, you guys!!! xo

[Einstein Noodle]

[Lorry]

😃 😃 & 😃

[Twilight]

Cryptic and interesting. It speaks to me of sadness, from both lack of love and missed opportunities in the past. However, acknowledging harsh realities in life; is partly how we come to terms with them? And, helps inspire us to keep trying..?

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you for acknowledging the part about the missed opportunities lost in wait. I regretfully have my share of them, and will continue to put them to use in the breadth of my poetry. Good to meet!

[Twilight]

Thanks! Feel free to add me too, if you like. It can be a relief also, to share our emotions and thoughts openly on here; and read through how people respond. Sometimes, people understand our meanings; sadly sometimes not.

[redzone]

Shakespeare would have said, Kelly, "The readiness is all". Perhaps it is only when we are old enough to realize that which was lost in "waiting". Unfortunately, sadness never waits.

You are another poet I have missed reading. So happy that you continue to write.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Perhaps not as frequent, but I do. I suppose as long as there's a breath in me, I will! Good to see you on my page, Curt. Are you still writing?

[emmajoygreen]

Superb language, beautiful echoes. You know how to put what you feel, dear Kelly and do so perfectly.
The exit from here enters sunlight, thanks to you.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Em. I deeply appreciate you being here!

[emmajoygreen]

Your'e welcome, tis brief yet - special

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[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Emily!

[Ted Kniffen]

Perhaps sadness is best left unspoken. Gather it in ... wallow in it ... let it simmer for a while then kick it in the a*s , slap a smile on your face and go at it again.

Well done Kelly.

I quite like this one

[Kelly Scheppers]

I try writing with an ode to some of our classics from time to time. I can only hope to be as remembered! Thank you, Ted!

[Ken e Bujold]

Damn girl, this is exquisite. Perfect. Evocation of mad George, master Will sets the tone and then you simply launch it out of the stadium and into the stratosphere.

[Kelly Scheppers]

I need your kind of magic...I really do! Thank you so much for making my day!

[Relic]

This is exquisite poetry, Kelly, short but exquisite. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hello, Tim! How are you? What a pleasure seeing you. Thank you so much for being here!