I must say, this write - It speaks. What a wonderful piece of poetry here, Kelly. The soul after all can't be ignored, it speaks and we must listen to it. you portray this expression of soul so beautifully here, sunlight peering, umbrella trees, slumbering sky, pea soup dawns, winding roads leading home - sounds like music to my ears. enjoyed reading this so much, thanks for sharing.
Posted 9 Months Ago
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9 Months Ago
I believe poetry allows our soul to speak. So thrilled you enjoyed this, Abhilash. Thank you!
Kelly, this poem is like a slow morning walk through sentiment and reflection. The “McCartney paths” line especially warmed me, such a tender nod to memory through music. Your soul speaks in ways that linger. Thank you for the quiet beauty.
An interesting write here...
I liked the line about sunlight through umbrella trees.....different.....
A pleasant flowing style and easy to read...and the final line about the "musicality in my head"......I always feel that people have a "song" in their head......something that only they know about...
Your poem finds a place with me, Kelly.
It speaks on being somewhat a sponge absorbing and holding things around us that lend support to a place where we each may find our footing (in an otherwise chaotic paradigm)
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
Thank you, Lara. I'm so glad my words made you feel the same!
I enjoyed this a lot. You've given us a tour, like a guide in a living museum; revealing to us what moves your soul. I know this way of being. I know that our language barely does it justice. But we keep trying nevertheless.
Your soul speaks to you in so many reflective moods....that you portray so soft and imaginatively....and everyday life ...all the things that are memorable to you...that are satisfying to you...we all need to ponder what our life is about and call to mind what it is we enjoy the most....lovely!
Warmly, B
I must say, this write - It speaks. What a wonderful piece of poetry here, Kelly. The soul after all can't be ignored, it speaks and we must listen to it. you portray this expression of soul so beautifully here, sunlight peering, umbrella trees, slumbering sky, pea soup dawns, winding roads leading home - sounds like music to my ears. enjoyed reading this so much, thanks for sharing.
Posted 9 Months Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Months Ago
I believe poetry allows our soul to speak. So thrilled you enjoyed this, Abhilash. Thank you!
Please, don't wince, this is not another Marathon review.
I just wanted to share how very much your words touched and wrapped around me like comforting velvet whispers, and, of course, how perfectly our souls juxtapose; though I'm ever envious of your incomparably blessed skills at expressing it.
I'm swept, M'Dear⁓*
What else to say, but how much I love it! ⁓ Richard🍃
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
How I've missed your savory reviews, Richard! Please know your presence is always welcomed here. Tha.. read moreHow I've missed your savory reviews, Richard! Please know your presence is always welcomed here. Thank you my dear! x
Brava. I enjoyed. My soul listens, to the winds of change and the falling tears; like raindrops in the storm. I hear the children crying; hungry in their beds. Of course I see the flowers blooming and ushering in the Spring but the sunshine of my soul is knowing the children are all fed. My soul listens; to the rattling of sabers and the snarling dogs of war when governments raise their greedy voices and grab with greedy hands all the hard work of the poor people; their homes and lives and lands. My heart remembers; when there was peace and now, with certain nostalgic longing, the voice of music and laughter on the breeze. It hurts my soul; these things it hears but my heart is open like the listener's ear; like a book to tell a tale of heartbreak, loss and woe. The Spring rains have washed the ashes from my mind. All around the grass is green and glistening. But there are whispers spoken only in the dark; on the other side of town, even when no one is listening. Still, my soul listens.
Posted 9 Months Ago
9 Months Ago
A review most poignantly written very much in the context of a poem! How dear you are! Thank you, F.. read moreA review most poignantly written very much in the context of a poem! How dear you are! Thank you, Fabian!