even when words don't find you, thoughts will. I love Paper Airplanes - it reminded me of my childhood and brought back those wonderful memories to the fore. a simple, honest write that captures the poet's mind. I like the expression here and memories it evoked, and thanks for sharing this, Kelly.
Posted 8 Months Ago
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8 Months Ago
My pleasure, Abhilash. Love having you here! Thank you!
I'm thinking if they had their choice they would choose to be poems knowing their life would be longer lived than the glide across the room only to end up under the recliner. I envision the trash man discovering them and being inspired to try his hand at the art of poetry. - we have to dream do we not - a very honest and clean piece of work - enjoyed it - carl
Posted 7 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
Funny you should mention the trash men. I always shred my paperwork up. My luck, someone might try .. read moreFunny you should mention the trash men. I always shred my paperwork up. My luck, someone might try their hand at finishing what I started. You never know! Thanks so much, Carl!
From someone who stopped writing for many years until today, you’re describing the sentiment I feared in those days.. feared that my mind and my pen would betray me.. that words will fail to find me.. and I’ll be left feeling hollow.. as hollow as my empty pages
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
I try and salvage what I can from those unfinished attempts. Write them down as poetry prompts. Th.. read moreI try and salvage what I can from those unfinished attempts. Write them down as poetry prompts. They just may be the fuse you need when that hollow feeling creeps in, taking hostage of your muse.
7 Months Ago
That’s a great way of approaching it.. yes one fallen leaf could be the seed to a new writing !
Yes, I understand this from a lot of experience.
For every nine misses it's possible you get a great hit!
We just need to keep trying.
Actually, the real importance was reminded to me by a man named Leonard Cohen. He once said:
“For me, art is the evidence of life and not the life itself. It is the ashes of something that has burned very well, and sometimes we confuse ourselves, and we try to create the ashes instead of the fire.”
Just keep present in your life, the writing is always secondary to that aliveness.
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
You are a wise man, Paul Michael. And I am very humbled by your presence. What a lovely review you.. read moreYou are a wise man, Paul Michael. And I am very humbled by your presence. What a lovely review you've given me. Thank you!
7 Months Ago
Kind words. I make myself open for experience, and hopefully, wisdom as a consequence. Maybe my on.. read moreKind words. I make myself open for experience, and hopefully, wisdom as a consequence. Maybe my only wisdom is being able te recognise and appreciate the wisdom of others who already walked the path before me.
I like paper airplanes. I'd never made one that flew worth a crap though until my daughter asked me to make her one. So I looked up and followed the directions to making a world record holding paper plane. Never ever seen a paper plane that looked like the finished product. But it flew fantastically; forty or fifty feet outside. Poetry is easy. Making paper planes is harder. (laughing) My oldest makes origami swans. I have one somewhere. If the tail is pulled it flaps its wings. But having read your poetry I certainly wouldn't throw any of it away either. It's those broken thoughts that need cohesion or adhesion or something to pull or string them together. I enjoyed the read.
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
I always salvage what I can from my unfinished pieces. I have legal pads with so many poetry prompt.. read moreI always salvage what I can from my unfinished pieces. I have legal pads with so many poetry prompts on them that just keep growing. Those origami swans are really cool, I've seen them. I once dated a merchant marine who made rings from dollar bills, with the noted amount facing upwards. Now, I simply just shred everything to be safe. Good to see you, Fabian. Always a pleasure!
Oh yes, every poet can identify with your words. Sometimes the best way to end a writers block is to write about it. Always enjoy your poetry Kelly. Lydi****
Posted 8 Months Ago
8 Months Ago
That's right! I'm taking credit these days for even grocery lists. Lol, thanks, Lydi!