It feels so calm and grounded, a quiet day by the sea. The image of seagulls “gathering wind songs” is beautiful, and the ending, where the fisherman never wishes for a different life; leaves you with a sense of peace and contentment. It's a quiet but profound celebration of finding joy and purpose right where you are.
Beautiful.
Posted 3 Months Ago
3 Months Ago
It surprises me at times, how my muse is inspired to write outside my wheelhouse. Nevertheless, I f.. read moreIt surprises me at times, how my muse is inspired to write outside my wheelhouse. Nevertheless, I feel blessed for it. Thank you most kindly, Roma!
Ahh, such a serene and lovely scene. The life of a simple fisherman appeals to me so much, I think I could have been one. Maybe I was one in another life. Your poetic skill puts me right there. I hope seafood is for lunch.
Posted 4 Months Ago
4 Months Ago
Any kind of seafood gets my vote for lunch! Thank you, Sam!
Delightfully crafted and paints a perfect picture in the mind's eye of a way of life, that like so much of tradition and heritage is so very quickly slipping away.
Ah Kelly - you know how to tug the heart-strings. Every year the Sea rises, and one day, Life could be like in Kevin Costner's ill-fated epic 'Waterworld'. The Sea never lets up, and she can be a cruel Mistress. Exceptional ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
I've never written about the sea before, but I must admit, I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for th.. read moreI've never written about the sea before, but I must admit, I very much enjoyed it. Thank you for the kind review, Tony!
Makes me want to venture onto the sea with this brave sailor and share in his toil. Hemingway and the Old Man come to mind.
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
One of my favorite movies of Spencer Tracy. Thank you for the reference, Fabian. Much appreciated!
5 Months Ago
I've an old copy of The Old Man and the Sea by The Scribner Library dated 1952, the year the novelet.. read moreI've an old copy of The Old Man and the Sea by The Scribner Library dated 1952, the year the novelette came out. It was $1.25 at printing.
She Kelly... Don't tell anyone but I've never tried lobster. Call me an old fashioned type of guy, but I refuse to eat anything that staresat me when it's on the plate. I also don't eat jello for a similar reason, that I ain't eating anything still moving when it's on my plate, but that's a whole different trauma between me and my therapist! 😃
But the sea air and the call of the gulls reminded me of happier times when my dad and uncles took me out sea fishing, which was a great day, right up until a speedboat passed too close and the wash wobbled us all hither and thither and right, you guessed... plop, in I went. That was about the time I realised all the growed ups were too drunk as the pathetically held out their fishing rods hoping to reel me in.
I went through four therapists with that one before giving up and fooling myself optimistically into thinking "well, I still can't swim but at least I can float with the best of them!" 😃
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
Thanks, Lorry. I promise you, your secret's safe with me!
resonates strongly as i am from new england. your lovely words soften the harsh reality of many. i am caught in a trap of acceptance and making the best of every situation.
"Every important worker will report what life there is in him." - Thoreau
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
I am thrilled, knowing it resonated with you so strongly. Thanks, Pete!
Many years ago I studied Masefield's "Sea Fever" and it turned me into a lover of salt water. I've been to Bar Harbor and any number of other fantastic little sea towns.
Your poem takes me back to those days when the sea was calling ... still does.
To paraphrase
"I must go down to the sea again
for the call of the running tide
is a wild call and a clear call
that cannot be denied."
Reading this, I felt contentment radiating from your lovely lines. The fisherman could look back on a life well lived. They are lucky, those amongst us who find their true place in the world. Fishing is such a high risk occupation. Will this be the last trip outbound for your fisherman? I sense he is at peace with his destiny, whatever it holds. I am so happy to hear from you Kelly. Well done. MSB
Posted 5 Months Ago
5 Months Ago
I haven't thought of a possible continuation. It was pure conjecture on my part to write what I did... read moreI haven't thought of a possible continuation. It was pure conjecture on my part to write what I did. Thank you for your encouragement and support, Michael! Your presence is much appreciated.