An Unfinished Sky

an unfinished sky

 

 

stoic branches

voyeuristically embellish

an unfinished sky,

illustrating

a still life impression

of wordless poetry,

void of allegory

and rhyme.

 

 

 

Author's Note

...photography by me, compliments of an October sky.

Reviews

[RomaJ]

The photograph is such a nice touch and it's beautiful.
I love the quiet, meditative quality of this poem. The “stoic branches” against an “unfinished sky” create such a vivid, contemplative image, and I appreciate how you embrace minimalism..showing that poetry doesn’t need allegory or rhyme to evoke feeling. There’s a stillness and clarity here that makes the scene linger in the mind, a perfect example of how observation alone can be poetic.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Roma. I walk every day, mostly taking pictures of nature, and getting to know dog-walkers...and their dogs. It affords me a lot of time to reflect upon my life and gain some inspiration for writing. Life is good! Thanks, again!

[Buddhistboy73]

Very autumnal ...

A "nude" scene that conjures up images of unfinished......

wordless poetry void of rhyme.....

This intrigues me....

BB73

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you. Much appreciate your visit. Glad you found my offering intriguing!

[Buddhistboy73]

You're welcome....feel free to stop by and check out one oy my poems some time...
BB73

[red93]

Stunning Kelly - somewhere I hear Rooks and Crows calling in the margins of this Excellent piece. The Autumn Winds can be bitter indeed. Fabulous ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

[Kelly Scheppers]

I took this photo back in early January, and sad to say, the tree no longer stands. What a majestic giant it was, profiling the sky. I miss its presence each time I walk past the void where it used to be. I feel lucky to have captured it in both art and poetry. Thank you, Tony!

[red93]

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[carl]

really intriguing piece of work - although not written as separate stanza the relationship between the first four and last four lines and the inclusion of "no allegory & no thyme" is lovely paradoxical, like a verbal mobius strip - enjoyed this very much - carl

[Kelly Scheppers]

Having your presence here is everything, Carl. Thank you!

[carl]

welcome and just realized it is your photo - great inspiration for the poem -carl

[Betty Hermelee]

Love brevity poetry, so well expressed, and a great photo to compliment it....well done!
Warmly, B

[Kelly Scheppers]

I gravitate to the brevity of words these days. It suits me, I think. Feels nurturing to the soul. Thank you, Betty!

[Betty Hermelee]

Indeed it does...hope you are well and happy!
Always a pleasure Kelly
Warmly, B

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Just gorgeous poetry. I enjoy when an artist can pack such a punch in so few words. Splendid work!

[Kelly Scheppers]

How wonderful it is seeing you, Travis. Thank you!

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

You know I can never stay away completely.