Universe

Do you think
We are as infinite
Through generations
Reborn through new civilisations
As the Universe is
Through a perpetual transformation
As the Multiverse is
Through Big Bangs
No beginning no end?

Reviews

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

No. global warming. we're all screwed.
i would write more but i don't really know what else to say. the universe is cyclical but the period that this planet is habitable is finite. and we are not helping sustain this delicate ecosystem.
i'm feeling a bit cynical today, forgive me.
this work is interesting though. imagining the kingdom of earth ever shall be world without end -- is a dream past generations held dear. i think modern society is turning into a su*cide cult and it bugs me no end.

[Tumi]

maybe it should remain rhetoric,
may be yes or Not sure,
a fine way to express thoughts

[Chris]

Yes...

Some questions need to be answered if the questioner is to grow or become more than they were.

[Dave W.]

I really like the flow of the line "Reborn through new civilizations, as the Universe is, Through a perpetual transformation", it just has a nice feel to it when reading. Good poem, thank you for writing it.

[Kate]

Thank you for your feedback 🙏🏼 not sure if it a poem or just a kind of quote 😃