Roots

Why few girls want a boy to leave his roots

Only bcz of them,iam havng a graceful life...
For them shouldnt i pray?
Only they support me like no1 can,
with them shouldnt i stay?
Shouldnt i stay with them forever,
or should i go to them,when iam in need?
Should i be a true son for them,
or should i show only sm greed?
Paa tought me how to walk,
my maa tought me how to talk..
Now u want me to forget everythng,
or wana b d only1,with whum i shld walk?
Tell me wat u want,want me to leave my roots?
They nourish me throughtout d life and
now they shldnt even see d fruits?
Jus bcz i fell in lv with u,i should stop thnking about them?
Jus bcz i prms i will do everythmg for u,shold i stop doing for them?
Come on girls,get a life......
stop tryng to pull me away from my life...
Yes u r a part,u r my wife...
Stop thnkng tat i'll leave them,for a love of 3 years...
Still i will b wid u,to wipe off ur tears....
Can not we all stay together?
Can not we pray together?
Is it necessary to leave them for u?
Or should i leave u for them?
Decesion is urs
we should stay away or shld stay together?
I prms ''we'' all will be happy forever

Author's Note

I wrote dis for my beloved maa paa

Reviews

[Mitali Shah]

Very nice Deepak. This not only applies for girls but for both the genders. Always support your parents when they need you.

[Deepak Sharma]

Thank you kathrine and confuser mam
u may read n review other poems also

[Katherine P. Haley]

This is really amazing! I am a little unclear about whether or not some of the spelling errors are purposeful or not (because I understand that can be a style that some use). If not, I'll point some out: "shouldnt" should be "shouldn't", i should be capitalized, "tryng" should be "trying", "sm" should be "some". If all of that was on purpose, I'm sorry if I didn't understand the reasoning behind it! I really enjoyed this poem, though. I though the concept was really good and had a very deep meaning behind it.

[Confuser]

Deepak: This poem at it's essense teaches others to respect their, as you write above, beloved parents. They do teach us, and it is unfair for a girl to come before them. As a young man becomes an adult and chooses a wife, she must understand and respect his parents, for without them, who would you be? They will become older one day, and it will be a child's job to insure their security and happiness, just as they did with him. A wife that does not respect this, is no wife, but a self-centered person, with no respect for her husband or herself. I love the poem and thank you so very much. Dale