Wild She

She is wild yet loyal

With her wild wings open wide,
She aspires to fly so high
Never has she loved angelic voice
She has always been a fan of devil's cry

Sin over sin, she may have committed,
But in this superstional society she never fitted

No ,she isn't an atheist
But these norms, she followed them the least

She isn't completely a bad beast with all of animosity
Instead is half filled with pure generosity

With skull in one hand and passion in another
She, in this sinful world, battles better than forefathers

From every person she learns
And to the faithful ones her back is never Turned

Author's Note

Will be pleased to get your reviews.

Reviews

[Abhishek Izy]

This is one of the most matured piece I read from you. The words are placed in symmetric design and it makes a perfect read.

The feelings behind is well understood as well. Sin is often just a judgement passed out of a contained collection of thoughts. One's sin might be someone's art, I say.

Nice one!

[Muskan]

Yeah , You got my sin right !
Thank you :-)

[BESMASMILE]

The beauty of poetry and the adept of artist to create a "She" we aspire to write.. befriend.. fall in life with.. unique read..

[Muskan]

Thank you so much for your words

[Wild Rose]

She sounds fun to be with
Once you have learned some of her ways
Guess we will never know her completely

[Muskan]

Yes indeed!! Thank you, really appreciate your review:)

[Chris Shaw]

None of us is perfect and I do believe we all have that dark side to our nature. I liked the feisty rebellious streak coming through here. I resonated with that. I enoyed your lines. Thank you.

Chris

[Muskan]

Thank you, really appreciate your review

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome.

[Anjeline]

Interesting poem with a fresh aspect. Down the line shows the rebellious but true side of all of us. Nice work 👍

[Muskan]

Thank you, I really appreciate your reviews

[Anjeline]

You're welcome 😊

[richieb]

Muskan,
Your words show the conflicting sides of all of us. We are all "a walking contradiction." You covered this condition of mankind in a very creative manner. Well done.
Peace,
Richie b.

[Muskan]

Thank you, I appreciate your review:-)

[Einstein Noodle]

your character is clearly written ..i like her ;))))) we are all sinful .. in need of forgiveness all the time .. but we are not allllllllllllll bad either .. i like her wild spirit .. i think rebelling against the norms we are raised in helps us find who we are ... tho too much rebellion can certainly lead to some destructive thoughts and behaviors that are difficult to recover from ... your "woman" reminds me of Mary Magdalene ..and of my wife (God rest her wonderful heart and soul) my wife was very loyal to those who won her trust ... thanks for sharing ... your poem brings me some good things to think about today
E.

[Muskan]

Thank you so much for your review
Really sad to hear about your wife
May her Departed soul rest in peace

[Einstein Noodle]

thank you...it was long ago ;) and i am sure she is .. in peace and rest