Oxymoron

Here I sit, clearly confused,
about the brain soberly boozed

With my tame wild,
I hear of the small crowd around,
Like a wise fool,they all sound

Reviews

[Rye]

what a wonderful write here, this is really good

[Muskan]

Thank you dear Rye

[Sawdust]

Perhaps too tamed words lose their intruging beauty

[Muskan]

I didn't exactly get your words
But Thank you for ur review

[Sawdust]

All i mean is that it was a great work but it lacked a poetic tendency to reveal itself, which forms a poem's soul.
Nevertheless, a great write.

[Muskan]

Maybe you can't actually call it a poem.... just random play od words with a hidden message

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a terrific play on words and use of one of my favorite tools in writing...
i am satedly starving for more of your writings...
j.

[Muskan]

Am glad you liked it.. Oxymorons are absolute love to me!!!
Thank you for your endearing review

[Daniela]

I really like this poem, I feel like it has deep meaning to it, or it could just be a piece of work you created for the fun of contradiction. Regardless, it really made me think. (:

[Muskan]

Yes ,it actually is carrying a deep meaning
M glad you liked it
Thank you