Broken

Hurting

How can this be?

We were once happy.

And now,

We hurt.

And now,

Perverted your ways have become.

 

How can this be?

Not friends, we were family.

And now,

It's painful.

You now, so distainful.

I'm crying,

You're awaiting.

I'm dieing,

You're hating.

 

I want to see blood run tonight.

Reviews

[curley]

=(. It's a good think you can express yourself through you're writing. Simple, but it really conveys your pain. You did a good job visually with the colors and fonts. The last line echoes in my head over and over, and I think I know what you mean. Nice job. Thanks for sharing. God bless you.

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

I am sorry that you were hurting and I hope that writing this poem helped to let it out.
Thanks for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

[Emily]

I like the use of bold, different fonts, and different colors. You're very good at what you do, kid =)

What's this about? Something I haven't heard of? (Not hard, considering I've been completely out of contact for over a month.)

[Mutzy]

*huggles* You need them.