Just to be Real

Me dealing with body immage issues.

You see that girl with that ugly face-

There is no place,

For her in society.

No room for anybody,

Without money,

Who isn’t pretty.

 

Somehow I want to be one of those.

Who everyone knows.

Be at the top of that attention,

No invention;

All fake.

 

Most say,

That’s not a way to live.

But should I give-

A care.

As long as the good attention,

And good reflection,

Are there.

Then I can’t really mind.

That’s really all I want,

All I need,

Yet I still need to find.

 

Take me,

Mold me,

Recreate me.

Devastate me,

Just make me something new.

Just tell me what to do,

So I can be like you,

Be like you. . .

That’s all I really want.

Everything I’m not;

Everything you flaunt;

Everything I want. . .

Is to be like you.

Reviews

[deeps]

Such a powerful write here!
So full of emotion and fellings
expressed so well.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. very powerful honesty.. we all admire others.. and women really tend to do this.. we judge based on outer beauty when the focus should be on the inside as that is what really matters. I often wonder why we do this to ourselves.. when in reality the world is beautiful with it's colourful variety of people.. all sizes and colours.. we are all the same inside and unique to each individual.. instead of focusing on what you don't like start by focusing on what you do like about yourself... it's okay to admire others but then don't be envious or jealous.. just be happy with what you have and do the best with it!!! Thank you for sharing! =)