The Landlord

There is a rented house 

inside every soul 

pay your rent

 if you hope to breathe

 open your mouth 

and just say it all

 before you get thrown

 back on the street.

-IRM

Reviews

[itai]

haha, thank you. Its writers block that am suffering from. So many ideas but they are suffering an untimely death

[MomzillaNC]

This feels like the beginning of something, like their should be more to your points.