Accepted

Accepted

A Poem by BriBri

It took you two days
And going to church to apologize
I accept you're not a bad guy 

No hard feelings 
Since I predicted how it ended
A farewell to our friendship 

I could say more but 
What more would I say 

Two souls going separate ways 

© 2014 BriBri


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"I accept your": Change "your" to "you're". Acceptance, yes.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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BriBri

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much

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