Shur

And when it hurts
I just think I'm not giving enough
How much pressure
for the diamond in the ruff

Reviews

[sonnie ibadah]

simple but carries a lot of feelings, well penned Bri

[BriBri]

As always your opinion is greatly appreciated. Thank you!

[MadalaJose]

Determination, perseverance; that's what I see in this poem. even the tone is of one who won't give up. nice poem

[BriBri]

Thank you for the comment. I always appreciate the review.