The fight.

Just a little something I wrote a while ago. Not to be taken seriously :)

You lurk in the shadows waiting to strike. 
You know how I feel but you still like
to inflict torture and pain . Breathless tears.
I can’t look at your eyes, I feel nothing but fear.

You know how to force me to do what you want,
you strut through the room and cunningly flaunt
your body that makes my chest so tight.
When I look away, you’ve won this fight

Its more than I can take when you make my heart race
You watch me run because I can’t face
your name. It sends shivers down my spine
My pulse increases as my strength declines

I catch you in the corner of my eye
and this time I’ll ask myself. Why
Do I let you frighten me at all?
Little spider on my wall.

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Serious or not it is a good write and bears a message with it as well. Bravo on this piece for your collection!

[Amit Parmessur]

Very nice piece, especially the end.

[B the Daydreamer]

So great! I really liked it, especially the ending! :)

[AndyJCash]

Haha! That ending made me laugh. I was tense and being really serious throughout and then it's all about a spider :P That's not to say I'm not scared by spiders...